This is my 3rd elevator pitch. In this one, I cut out a lot of the fluff from the last one and got great straight to the point. I was also much more confident this time around as I knew what I wanted to say due to much practice and rehearsal. Hope you enjoy.
Hello Connor,
ReplyDeleteI have read your idea napkin so I was interested to see how your elevator pitch is coming along. I had a really hard time understanding what you were saying in the video. I’m not sure if the sound quality was distorted from posting it online. From what I was able to understand I do have one suggestion. I don’t think you should mention this not working or Chick-fil-a and saying that they would be fine even if it failed because I think they need to feel like this would be an important step forward in their company. Maybe mention how places like Taco Bell and McDonalds were able to diversify their menus and bring in more revenue successfully.